Wednesday, 9 April 2014

Once upon a Brown Bear ...

In Room 4 we are learning to identify and use the features of a narrative. As part of our literacy work we have been writing 6 sentence narratives by following criteria ... a whole story in 6 sentences, amazing!
Now we are going to write a 6 sentence narrative about our dear friend Brown Bear.
I'll start with the first sentence, however if someone posts a better sentence I'll swap it.
Once upon a time there was an adventurous bear cub called Brown Bear .    (Now follow the criteria to post a comment for the second sentence and I'll post the most interesting one. Remember it's an imaginative story.) 

4 comments:

  1. Hi Room 4. I really like your Blog. It looks like you have lots of fun with your learning at Tauriko School. Have fun writing your narratives about Brown Bear and good luck with your attempt to get to 1000 views on your awesome Blog. From Karen McKinney

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  2. I loved having Brown bear at my house he's silly and cute.

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  3. Brown bear you are lucky to have all of these people who want you to go there house. you must be a busy bear!

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  4. Brown bear had a lot of fun at my house he even got the honey jar

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